Artist Website Product
Home Page: https://17pullenm.wixsite.com/website
Hyperlinked Page: https://17pullenm.wixsite.com/website/music
-To navigate from the 'Home' page to the hyperlinked page, use the header bar and click on the link named 'Gallery'.
-My audiovisual task is a blooper reel that can be located by scrolling down to the bottom of the hyperlinked 'Gallery' page under the subheading 'Bloopers and BTS: Runaway Music Video'.
-My website produced can be viewed from the link above. On some monitors, it is best viewed at down to 70% - 90% magnification.
Hello Molly,
ReplyDeleteI'm going to give this 20/25 for now. The blooper reel is entertaining and clearly fulfils the brief as a high level, edging into excellent. Overall, everything here is in the GOOD section of the coursework criteria, with a clear sense of audience and a good range of different content. I'd really like you to take a look at Joanna Attwell's piece from last year. In particularly look at the way that her artist engages with the audience in a way that is highly convincing. I do like the use of light and the creativity in the way that you have used images, but it is not screaming connection to me. Look especially at the images Joanna uses on her first page and the way that they fit inside the frame, which itself resembles a CD cover. All this messaging is perfect in terms of the product.
It's good work so far. Already A grade, now push into the A star.