21/25 You've done a really good job of this piece. In honesty, I'm not wowed by your front cover in terms of attracting your target audience, but it does do the job of being a convincing piece, especially given the confines of your available equipment. Contents page is excellent. You have been quite subtle with your appeal to your target audience, and when it comes to the coursework proper, I'd like you to be less subtle. That way it is certain of getting a high grade.
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ReplyDeleteYou've done a really good job of this piece. In honesty, I'm not wowed by your front cover in terms of attracting your target audience, but it does do the job of being a convincing piece, especially given the confines of your available equipment. Contents page is excellent. You have been quite subtle with your appeal to your target audience, and when it comes to the coursework proper, I'd like you to be less subtle. That way it is certain of getting a high grade.
I'm genuinely impressed by this. Well done!